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Offline solomofo

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he can spin really fast
and hes covered in spikes
hes got a friend called tails
who can fly like a kite
i dunno much else
except he was blue
n i can vaguely remember
a red hedgehog too..

hehe tht was fun :D

erm nxt topic is..erm....snow!!!

Offline 01Becky

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Quote from: solomofo
he can spin really fast
and hes covered in spikes
hes got a friend called tails
who can fly like a kite
i dunno much else
except he was blue
n i can vaguely remember
a red hedgehog too..

hehe tht was fun :D

erm nxt topic is..erm....snow!!!


HAHA! I really like that one! :D

Offline Velvet-Rocker

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The white powder that fills a broken home
Becomes cold and tears the finance
Where I roam, I destroys, or heightens romance

It's power kills some
and dangeorus to drive around
So powerful to make you numb
And profuond-ly disrespected in many ways.

For it is not coke.
It's the god known as snow
And it's physical strength, as well as mental
makes it My jesus, and other's too.

next topic: Faster Pussycat

Offline Hannibal-the-Barbarian

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Faster Pussycat

It's the kind some people  like, you know,
Whenever she's purring, calm her down, take it easy, take it slow.
Than again we want her to jump on our lap,
start purring again,
And after she's tired in your hands she will take a nap.
To fasten her up, you tickle her behind her ears,
She likes that, and she knows no fear.

For all we know, She's just a Jellicle cat.


Offline Hannibal-the-Barbarian

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Faster Pussycat

It's the kind some people  like, you know,
Whenever she's purring, calm her down, take it easy, take it slow.
Than again we want her to jump on our lap,
start purring again,
And after she's tired in your hands she will take a nap.
To fasten her up, you tickle her behind her ears,
She likes that, and she knows no fear.

For all we know, She's just a Jellicle cat.



NEXT ONE: ARISTOCATS

Offline GunzNRoses

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Why am I writing a poem about an aristocrat?
Cuz I have no clue what it means
By vocab's below the point
Of the very obscene
I looked it up in the dictionary
I still don't know the meaning of the word
Isn't this so absured?
So I looked it up in the thesaurus
And it just gave me similies
What a pain in the ass
I guess I should be put in a remedial class...

Next topic: Lip rings

Offline Negative Creep

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You get a sharp piece of metal through your lip
I'm sure it must hurt
It would hurt as much as a bullet through the hip
I'll bet you my shirt

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Offline vrRocksMySocks!

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how about one of " little red riding hood? :lol:

Offline angel_lsfe

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Sometimes it's hard for me to trust
But sometimes im too naive
Sometimes the walls close in on me
And it gets hard to breath

Sometimes I feel like im falling
Sometimes I dont even care
When you've been falling for this long
You just cant wait to get there

Sometimes I cut my wrists
Just to watch them bleed
To make sure I still exsists
Sometimes its what I need

Sometimes I think you love me
Sometimes I dont think you care
Sometimes I find myself wondering
If you're even there

Because sometimes its hard to tell
Whats real and whats pretend
I used to think none of this
Would matter in the end

But now you're laughing at me
And you think that I dont hear
But you're voice plays over and over
Inside my head
Now everythings too clear

Sometimes it hurts to open my eyes
Somethings are too real
Sometimes I cover it up with lies
Sometimes I use to feel.

Long on I know. Sorry :D

Iv had tons of pms wanting to know if this could be turned into a song. Sure anyone can add to it and use it if you want, as long as you let me know :)
« Last Edit: October 11, 2005, 02:18:31 PM by angel_lsfe »

Offline STEPH_LVS_VR

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^thats realy awsome... i wish i could write like that, and make sence at the same time. lol
keep up the great work!:D

Offline LunaMidnight

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My friend made this one up;

I LIKE THINGS!
AND THEY LIKE ME!
....BUT THEY DON'T!

We run around and sing it really loud. It's pretty bad but it's funny. :lol:

Offline Hannibal-the-Barbarian

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Shout!

You know that I know,
that when you know I don't know anymore,
that I know knowing is knowingly the best you know,
And than I remember,
You know nothing...

Next Pioem: Dirt

Offline Hannibal-the-Barbarian

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A band I love,

There're more than one band I love,
Good bands getting born, it continues, it's endless,
but I still have to pick one of these bands I love,
There're so manny great bands, Of their music,I never have/get innough...

One of these bands is Velvet Revolver,
They make music that hits me very deep.
I listen their music when I'm awake, and they apear in my dreams when I'm asleep.

Another great musician is Alice Cooper and the mucisians he chooses to work with,
His shows are funny, hylaric and unbelivible, everyone who has seen them has to admit.
he cares about his fans, and love floas around, gets sometimes inconfersations between female fans  really intense.

Ozzy is also on my list, though he quited, he won't fade for me into the mist.
I loved his shows always from start to end, love is simple and get's sometimes really complicated,
For me one thing is true, when love is shown, it's for real, it's not something you can pretent.

Another band I love to death, It's a band I only ones in concert have  met,
I loved their show, it was the first rockband I saw, standing there in a blue jeans and white T-Shirt,
Standing in the crowd with a half hanging open jaw.

The name of that band has wings, boys mostly won't easily call it their lit,
Exept perhaps for the die hard fans, They know alreaddy I'm talking about Aerosmith.
now I almost come to the end of this poem,
I have a band that if it stays to continue as it goes right now, will turn into eternal doom.

GN'R old bandformation is one of the bands I also really love,
As I alreaddy told youthe new formation is not really something I love.
Slash's Snakepit is loved by me way more, 't's only a pitty the records are really hard to find in a Dutch store.

To end this poem one last thing I have to say,
There much more great bands like Runaway Phoenix, Sextus and Roxy 77,
I really hope they will stay, that kind of bands, I love to hear, Not just now,
but for the rest of my life too, every day by day,

next poem about The Blue Army, (I don't mean The Smurfs)     



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next topic: your own identity

i look in the mirror to see my face
the background behind me a strange place,
brown eyes black hair, a killer grin,
show off those clothes n give us a spin,
who am i you ask? i have no clue,
could i just ask who are u?
that was crap :oops:

next topic-this is random but lets see what happens., a pen :D

Offline Negative Creep

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There was a pen I used to know
Back in '62
Not a single man could live
Within' a 500 metre radius
He could shoot that ink oh man oh man
Inky inky box of pens
Oh hell
Oh hell
Oh hell
Dear Bell

Offline born2boogie

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i just did one about a pen aim i to late

This pen has become my friend
As I scribble with no end on
Meaningless rimes of my time’s
The pages just keep on coming
Can’t stop the flow the pen wont let me go
Night and day
Night and day
Night and day
Can’t sleep so to the pen I go to release
The never-ending thoughts of my ghosts
I know the pen won’t ever let me go
Coz I sold my soul so to the pen I go
But in the end it really means nothing
Just meaningless rimes of my time’s
Night and day
Night and day
Night and day
Black & blue even green too don’t care
As long as I got my pen my dear friend

Ok this is my first post here and I haven’t seen all the other poems yet

« Last Edit: December 06, 2005, 02:33:15 AM by born2boogie »

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Offline Slash1337

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Ohhh. I dont write but how bout. Ummm.

Somehting that you cant get outa ur head? lol.

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Fine I'll give it a try

Its 9:15 in the morning and I just got out of bed,
For some reason i can't get this song outta my head,
"Hit Me Baby One More Time" is a real pain in the ass,
All I know is that my patience is not going to last,
If i have a song in my head, at least let it rock,
I don't want this pop in my head as i stare at the clock,
Its been in my head for an hour now, and shows no sign of stopping,
I'm going insane so the advil, I start popping,
The song gets outta my head, but now I feel ill,
I go and lay down, and just try to chill,
Now I'm freakin out, and trying to rhyme,
All cause that damn song, "Hit Me Baby One More Time"


ok that really sucked

Offline born2boogie

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That was good and funny too... bshea2k5

Thought you should know, I still love you so
When I close my eyes its still you holding me close…

Thought you should know, your still the air that I breath
Even though you don’t really need me…

Thought you should know, I tried to let you go
But your still my true love the one I love the most…

Thought you should know, of the pain I hold inside
Even though you don’t see me cry…

Thought you should know, I pray for the day we meet again
But will you even remember who I’m…

Thought you should know, baby I do understand
If only you could have taken my hand…

Thought you should know, just in case you didn’t know
Baby I love you so and I’ll always be here for you…

ok sorry passes sick buckets  :lol: I did have a good one but can't post it here :twisted:

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                       He is the one


his eyes are warm his smile is so bright I think about him day and night. He is a dream come true and that is why I always tell him I love you. He is my treasure and he is my supporter that is why he wants to have another daughter. His love for me is as warm as you can see and that is why he is the one for me. He is my boyfriend the only man that I will ever love and thats why this past Christmas he gave me a tree ornament of a dove and that is why he is the only man that I will ever love.

I hope that you guys liked this poem.

Offline Sweet Honesty

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Thunder pounds out the last beat, time is stealing the breath
From within the pain is harsh, obcession reigns supreme

I close my eyes, the storm roars on
Dreams are tormenting, lust rages along

Tormenting my soul with every passing second
You know I'm here, but you don't know where   

Offline Pennsylvania

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wow this thread is dead (theres my contributing rhyme...j/k)

like a plane crash youre really on fire now
a sight to remember laced in desire now
youre the face on my wall and the shrine in my closet
wanna hook you up with p effin a's hottest

youre etched in my mind tattooed on the brain
temperature rising, integrity down the drain
hey im just slick white trash with nothing better to do
then waste my time at vr forum penning crap about you



Offline Ravine343

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I'm reviving this cuz it looks fun, i'll start with a poem about lip rings...

It's hanging there like a severed tooth
Somehow gruesome welded to the lip
I met her in a telephone booth
While I was on an acid trip
She had a metal lip piercing
In bed she was a fierce thing
She told me that her name was Mary
Turns out it was really John, a fairy
I'll never be the same again
The lip ring's curse, the curse of men.

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